Its almost been a year
I have been staying here
Far away from my space
My city my place..
Miss those traffic ,miss those roads
Miss the home ,miss the fun
Miss my cousins,miss my friends
Miss the functions ,miss the traditions
Here where I stay
There is no one to share
All alone away from home
Trying to live life on my own ..
Miss my mom food miss her love
Miss my dad who pampers me a lot
Miss my time spent with My in laws
Miss them more miss them to the core.
life has to go on
i need to move on
ill take a break too
to visit my place soon.
My poem using the prompt HOME
Its the pain of staying away from family n friends and living at another place .
Live-😊-Life.. 
I’ve been through this…long ago…exactly same feelings. They never go.
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Ya its a pain
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Aww. Those words really come from your heart. I felt your longing to come home! Just be brave and be still. You can do it! 🙂
You may want to read mine: http://wp.me/p4ZhSl-d3. 🙂
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Thanks dear
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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very beautifully written 🙂
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Thanks a lot kat
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It’s touching and sweet
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Thank u huma
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You do a great job of conveying emotion in your poems. I really like the idea of posting a poem based on a one word prompt.
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Thank you so much… I m glad you like my idea of writing about my life in a poetic way
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thank you vinay, nice meeting you, yes I need a vacation urgently
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Beautifully written. It’s poignant. I have not been in your shoes, but I could feel the emotions. I hope a few vacation days come up to cheer you up soon 🙂
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Me too… sailing in the same boat 😦
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Hmmm…only we can feel this pain:(
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I can hear you… The feelings in the poem are described with such an attention to detail, it’s impossible not to imagine oneself in the place of the poet here…
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Thank you, it’s all about the homesick feeling when we stay away from our loved ones
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Your writing is very natural as are the emotions.
I love how your rhythm brought out everything even stronger.
Hold on… they will be thinking of you as you are thinking of them 🙂
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Thanku schattenengel for your words… They motivate me to write even more better
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